This week I had to submit Task 2 for peer review, I was very excited to do this as I really wanted to get some constructive feedback to help me improve my Task 2's website, blog and also my instructions. I also wanted to review someone elses work so i could see if they had any useful ideas for that i could also include for my task 2.
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My completed draft website for Task 2 |
After getting out of bed, tending to my little boy and having some breakfast on Monday morning, i went straight onto the LMS Murdoch site and looked to see if the peer review link had been put up yet, it had! I straight away opened it and followed the instructions that were in a PDF file attached to the Task 2 section of the LMS. I added my website URL and submitted it to be peer reviewed. I then went about reviewing a fellow students work. I read through their website, blog and then proceeded to follow their instructions to help me to gain access to their social media site. They did a online book club and it was extremely well presented. There was a lot of visuals and this helped me to gain some ideas about visuals i could use to complete my Task 2. I gave them some constructive feedback and also complemented them on the great work they had done for Task 2.
It is now Thursday afternoon and the link for peer review has now been closed. I am very upset that in the three days that my website was up on the LMS no one decided to review it. This would have greatly improved my chance of succeeding in this Task as i work well when i have been given constructive feedback to work on. I even posted on the discussion forum for Task 2 and asked if someone would review my Task 2, and it seemed there was many people having the same problem as me.
I have now asked my mum if she would mind having a look at my Task 2 and reviewing it for me, so i can get a little understanding of what i need to do!
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My Mum's the Best, Whatley 2011 http://www.kids-bookreview.com/2011/05/review-my-mums-best.html
After writing this blog, I went home and found I had a new Facebook friend request from Jasmine, a girl who is also doing this technology unit. Jasmine is not in my tutorial for this unit, but outside of class we discussed peer reviews and how I had not yet been reviewed. Jasmine then went out of her way to do a peer review for me when she had already completed one for someone else. Jasmine sent me a Facebook message Thursday evening to inform me of this so I could go on the peer review site and have a look. I was so happy with the feedback I was given and have used it all to help improve my Task 2! Thank you so much Jasmine for taking the time out to help me improve my Task!
Until next time =)
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